Monday, February 13, 2006
Tenth Post Ever...
We had an awesome weekend in Calgary, went shopping, got build-a-bear stuff, saw Mr. and Mrs. Smith(it was really funny), and went hiking and stuff. So yeah, we had a great time with Justina and Stephen and all those folks out there.Anyway, a couple posts back I mentioned that I was going to put the rough draft of my poem here for constructive critisism, so here it goes:
Someone
When someone you love moves away, what do you do?
When someone you love leaves you in the dark, what do you do?
When someone you love doesn’t love you back, what do you do?
Do you cry and wish it had never happened?
Do you try and get over it and find someone new?
Do you move on and try to forget them?
When someone you love moves away, it’s painful.
When someone you love leaves you in the dark, it hurts.
When someone you love doesn’t love you back, your heart breaks.
You want to cry and wish it never happened.
You want to get over it and find someone new.
You move on and try to forget them.
But when someone you love moves away, it’s okay to cry.
When someone you love leaves you in the dark, it’s okay to move on.
And when someone you love doesn’t love you back, it’s okay to try and forget them.
But crying doesn’t change your love for them.
But moving on doesn’t change the way you love them.
But trying to forget them doesn’t change how you feel for them.
You will always love someone, no matter what they do to you,
That feeling will never change if you truly love them.
Amanda at 9:38 AM
